MY FIRST INTERIOR POST FOR C&C

[edmon242004]

Hi, posting my first interior render , comments & crits would be really helpful, thanks

[edonk]

Re: MY FIRST INTERIOR POST FOR C&C

Looks great for a first interior on Vray. Congrats!

[fymoro]

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Yes really cool for the first...
Maybe you will have to reduce a bit the bump map on the door material.

[luis agamez]

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nice one to be a first interior... congrats!!!

[40th]

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Great job for a first time.
The Bg looks odd to me. The curtains are too opaque IMHO make them vray2sided material.

I like the noguchi table can you share it or if you know where can I find one.

[ACastro]

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hi 40TH

http://sketchup.google.com/3dwarehou...98&prevstart=0

Edmon242004

Congratulations, nice work


Castro

[40th]

Re: MY FIRST INTERIOR POST FOR C&C

Thanks Castro, But it looks chunky. And I'm too lazy to make it myself :

[DaveReyes]

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Excellent render for the first try my first interior render it was really terrible. And keep improving and posting this a community where you can grow very fast.

40th i have that coffe table and i can defenetly share with you. send me a personal message with your email.

[arqestevez1]

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daaamn nice and realistic...
furniture's cushions look soo clean, sharp and "noiseless"...
illumination is fine too, but you reaally need a nice background...

[edmon242004]

Re: MY FIRST INTERIOR POST FOR C&C

hi everybody, thanks for the crits and comments,, I will adjust somethings then post the final render..

[omegaslasher]

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-maybe some displacement on the carpets?
-soften the shadows just a little bit
-some interior lighting would go a long way

well done, what material did you use for the glass on the noguchi table?

[edmon242004]

Re: MY FIRST INTERIOR POST FOR C&C

Thanks for the pointers omega, the glass on the table is a transparent texture with the fog enabled.