Foodmart

[rodnez]

Hello guys, this is a render of a small project that i'm working on and it would be great if i can get som tips, C&C in order to improve my work. Thanks!

[rodnez]

Re: Foodmart

[gallystops]

Re: Foodmart

If the inside is modeled why not make the 1st & 2nd floor glass transparent. Even a basic model of the inside will add significant depth.

I see one shadow of trees in the foreground (to the right) it looks great. Maybe add more trees to give more coverage in shadows. May look really cool!

What is the grey texture? Stone? cement? If its stone maybe a nice bitmap with a nice bump would add some realism. Likewise with the white surface.

Where is this located? Right now the sky BG makes it feel very isolated. Maybe a different camera angle and some more attention to neighboring buildings and terrain?

These adjustments will really add to the realism of the image.

Love the balconies and the awnings. They look really cool.

Best regards,

-Gallystops-

[arqestevez1]

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hi rodrigo...
i think that it helps when you choose the right background... if you don't have anything beind your model you can use some trees...
it seems that you need some help with the cars and people... if you want i can send you some nice 3d cars and 2d people

[edonk]

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hi rodrigo...
i think that it helps when you choose the right background... if you don't have anything beind your model you can use some trees...
it seems that you need some help with the cars and people... if you want i can send you some nice 3d cars and 2d people

Any links to the peeps and cars Omar? I am always on the lookout for better models.

[arqestevez1]

Re: Foodmart

i don't have links, but i've used wetransfer.com, it allows people to send up to 2 Gb in one mail... i just need a mail... or mails

[rodnez]

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Thanks a lot Gallystops! Thats why i love this forum, people here really like to help others in trouble.
About the inside actually there isn't anything modeled, thats why i didn't want to see the interior and a clear glass wouldn't help but i will try to use some chairs and sofas and definitly that will improve the image, About the shadows i will put some trees in the left side of the image to improve that effect, and with the very bright sun the thing is that the building is in Honduras and believed me my friend the sun here is insane!! haha. The bump will also improve the walls and i'm going to add it . Thanks for the tips and have a nice day. (Sorry for my english, i'm learning that too).

[rodnez]

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That would be great Arqestevez but tell me which way do you use to add people? with transparency maps or photoshop because i use transparency maps and that's the result but probably the images i got aren't nice enought.
If you have nice models i would love to have it too. Thanks for sharing!

[arqestevez1]

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just post an email adress... let's but right now i'm just about to go out of the city for the weekend, and i will be back on monday
have a nice day :P

[rodnez]

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rodnezv@gmail.com and thank you very much arqestevez, I'm in your debt !

[arqestevez1]

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your welcome, i'll send them after work.

[arqestevez1]

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check your mail man...