Apartments complex

[KELPER]

This is my second render and I am open to comments I hope you enjoy the views...After I read the manual and I ask a couple of 100's questions in the forum I get this result with an almost none post PS work...

Kelper.

[arqestevez1]

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hey man, it's a really nice design, i liked it a lot.
materials and illumination look fine.
i liked the bushes, those are pngs? do you think you could share them?
nice renders, keep posting, and again, great design.

[KELPER]

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Thanks for the comments I will post some bushes later with attachments...

kelper.

[holmes1977]

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Great renders. Interesting design.

Few crits are that I think the images need a bit of
brightening. Maybe give the images some warmth.
At the moment they look a bit gloomy. increase the sun
and produce some more shadows. In the 3rd image there doesn't seem
to be any.

I feel in Arch viz you want to look at an image and want to project
yourself into the scene. I don't really in these images.
BUT I COULD BE. Change the mood invite me in.

Not sure about the trees (clipmaps/PNG) they look alittle flat, but
you have nailed the gardens

With a few minor changes I feel you could have a superb result.
You are so so close.

[madmax_cg]

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On the second image, the car on the left looks weird.......right?

[Chisel]

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for the most part the materials and camera shots are great i just think the major problem is the illumination of the scene some contrast would be good with a bit of sun light or the contrast of the warm interior with a cool dusk environment would be great but you really are very close to producing some grate images. the tree clip maps look a bit flat as well and as was said b4 nice garden. good luck and keep posting.

[KELPER]

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Thank you for all your comments, the unfortunately the client want to be like that without so much brightness he want a cloudy day and dark afternoon, so I do as much as I can with this requirements. I render also daylight and night but I the client only let me release this jobs for now. I will post daytime render brightness later....

Thanks again for all the comments. (This is my first render)

Kelper.

[aclark]

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Kelper,

I actually like the overcast lighting. However, I'm sure there are ways you can still brighten the image without affecting the appearence of a mid-day overcast lighting solution.

Overall awesome!

[holmes1977]

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Kelper,

I actually like the overcast lighting. However, I'm sure there are ways you can still brighten the image without affecting the appearence of a mid-day overcast lighting solution.

Overall awesome!

I agree. What I often do is have a look at Architectural photography and copy the tones. I also like the overcast look, but think your images need some high lights. Its just a bit murky and gloomy. The only reason Im pushing these points is because I really think you have a winner on your hands.

Since this is only your 2nd exterior render, I cant wait to see what you are going to produce in the future.

[KELPER]

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Thank you for all the great comments!!!

[KELPER]

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I will place here my second post soon...

[aclark]

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Kelper,

Could you also share your .visopt with us? I work in Seattle and I have been working on an overcast lighting solution but I have not found anything that looks quite like this yet.

Much appreciated

[KELPER]

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Hi, I am on vacation but in a couple of days I will be at my office and i will post the info for overcast renders.. NP.

Kalu.

I will be back in 2 days...

[KELPER]

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Working in the second post in my vacation...

[KELPER]

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nice work