Bedroom- Final Final render (2nd page). Critics/opinions please :)

[gallystops]

Re: Bedroom - Final render (In first post). Harsh critics needed!

Much improved since the first image. I really like;

the curtains and carpet. the shadow are great too!

I would have liked to have seen a different fabric on the ottoman. It is very similar to the color of the floor.

A couple different views would help too. I would like to see more of the recessed/cove lighting over the bed . Right now its hard to see. It would be nice to show that off.

I think the reflections on the non mirror closet doors should have a lower ref/highlight glossiness to them. Right now they have the same sharpness as the mirror.

Other then that i think this is terrific and a massive improvement since the first image you showed.

-Gallystops-

[indielyness]

Re: Bedroom - Final render (In first post). Harsh critics needed!

Thanks! Very helpful. I agree with it all, especially about the ottoman! I will make the adjustments and repost. Thanks for that, if anyone else has anymore critiques, please fire away

[indielyness]

Re: Bedroom - Final render (In first post). Harsh critics needed!

Here is the image with some changes to it:
I'll try to add renders of other angles soon.

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/9...roomfinal2.png



Thanks guys for looking!

[arqestevez1]

Re: Bedroom - Final render (In first post). Critics to improve needed please.

hi mebo.
i think you still need to increase some of the materials subdivisions... in the reflection layers, of course...
that will remove some of the noise... also, we gotta be really carefull with the postproduction, cause when we make light and color corrections, some times something happens with the corrected areas... do you see the vertical multicolor spots an the sides of the render and specially behind the guy?
i've noticed that those things appear when i modify the shadows and highlights... :P

[deanfitton]

Re: Bedroom - Final render (In first post). Critics to improve needed please.

+1 for the mention on subdiv increases.... very noisy.

absolutely love the curtains..... but hate the silhouette person, if it was me id lose it completely or find the perfect lady to fit!

kind regards

[indielyness]

Re: Bedroom - Final Final render (In 2nd page). Critics/opinions please

Here's the last render + pp that i did.

I'm happier with it but don't know how to improve it anymore, apart from the making the (hot) girl fit in a bit better, but since i've been working on it for a while, i think this will be the last one i do. ;D,

as always, all comments will be appreciated.

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4...atest10oct.png