another quick exterior

[arqestevez1]

an update

Hi. I reused an old model of mine to make a really quick render for another architect. there are a few mistakes with the texture maping, but i really don't know what i am doing wrong.
feel free to coment

[teofas]

Re: another quick exterior

hi omar, its coming nice but heres some c&c bro:

lightning is nice but a little flat, some edges are too sharp (como serrucho), and theres too much noise, in my opinion your backgrounds are always too blurry, maybe some more sharp from time to time can be good..i like the reflection on the plants materials. Maybe you can add some life by adding some dishes, glassess, etc. I think your settings can be higher so cuality can improve.

but for a quick render i guess is fine....keep up the good work bro. saludos!

[arqestevez1]

Re: another quick exterior

i just uploaded an update with some corrections.

[DaveReyes]

Re: another quick exterior

Hey Omar is looking good nice hdri!, and lightning improve mapping my friend! congrats!.

[arqestevez1]

Re: another quick exterior

thank you man...
this was really fast, but i had to see how those plants from the N5 project behave... it's like a little practice for my contest...
what do you think can be improved?
by the way, i just found a couple of night hdri, ill send them to you later jeje

[dan16198899]

Re: another quick exterior

Me gusta mucho el render se ve muy bien!, no sé si es mi impresión, pero la pata de la silla que se ve justo debajo de la mesa de la izquierda parece que esta flotando creo que es porque no tiene mucha sombra.

Me gusta la reflexión que tienen las hojas de las plantas y los parasoles están muy bien también!

[arqestevez1]

Re: another quick exterior

gracias dan.
de hecho si esta flotando, estaba usando un displacement, y los componentes estaban arriba para que quedaran justo sobre el piso, pero al eliminar el displacement, los componentes se quedaron un par de cms. arriba.
gracias por comentar.
saludos

[arqestevez1]

Re: another quick exterior

just for fun and practice

[ben49]

Re: another quick exterior

Fantástico Omar.