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    Hello folks! ;D

    I'm currently working on an interior scene. It still needs a lot of work but I'd be happy to receive some comments already in this early state.



    This is a list I'm making for myself (and others) of things I'd like to add and improve:
    -Lower size of the sun
    -Less noise
    -Add picture or art frame above the cabinet
    -Add decorative elements on the cabinet (books, "toys", flowers,..)
    -Add decorative elements on the table (pads, knives,...)
    -Finish kitchen (door handles, texturing, cooker and faucet+sink)
    -Add decorative elements to kitchen (bowl with croissants, glasses, plates,...)
    -Add carpet
    -Higher GI paramater 2 -> 3
    If anyone could help me providing anything stated above I'd really appreciate it.
    Any other ideas to cheer up the space would be appreciated as well!

    Cheers,
    Roo Evans

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    Re: WIP Interior scene, crits & advice

    it's looking great dude, and i think that you should keep the dark side at the bottom of the image, but you need an omnilight overthere... just to brighten that a little :P
    los campeones no nacen, se hacen...

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    • #3
      Re: WIP Interior scene, crits & advice

      Roo,
      that looks like a nice start!

      If I'm not mistaken, there are windows behind the camera. If it's so, then you should orient the floor boards to point towards the windows. This is how a professional would lay such a floor.
      Oh, and the juice looks a bit funny. Maybe try a translucent material!

      Looking fwd to seeing how you progress!


      Cheers,
      Matt

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      • #4
        Re: WIP Interior scene, crits & advice

        arqestevez1, hey man, thanks for the tip, I'll try to up the GI first and if that doesn't do the trick I might consider an omni

        Matthias, Yeps you're right, there are windows behind the camera. Oh really? Never thought about it, although I prefer them this way composition wise, if not the home will look more slim and deeper I think.
        Haha yes the orange juice, I've been messing a lot with it, up to now this is the best I could come up with, so any help is appreciated.

        Will post an update tomorrow

        Cheers,
        Roo Evans

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        • #5
          Re: WIP Interior scene, crits & advice

          Update! Now I'm gonna work on the kitchen



          Cheers,
          Roo Evans

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          • #6
            Re: WIP Interior scene, crits & advice

            very realistic what version did u use?

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            • #7
              Re: WIP Interior scene, crits & advice

              dude,

              nice! I love whats going on on the left part of the image. I like the books and magazines.

              I dislike the camera angle..and i know you have more work to do with the rest!

              Make the whole thing POP like the sideboard and this will look fantastic.

              -Gallystops-
              -Intel Core i7-930-<br />-12GB DDR3 SDRAM-<br />-ATI Radeon HD5970-<br />-1TB Hard Drive-

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              • #8
                Re: WIP Interior scene, crits &amp; advice

                Magazines and books look very natural, very nice renders, I'm waiting for kitchens

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