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[camionero]

Latest work ..very small work ..
those maybe are the final renders and hoping to make them real so please comment and critic them!



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[camionero]

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************Update ************
Here is the day shot hope some one comment it :'( im acepting strong critics or if some one come to say hi y accept it :-[

[robbo_cg]

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the proportion looks skew whiff , is it set on perspective?

[40th]

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Pretty realistic.
I like the specular effect at night shot, but all images has a gloomy atmosphere.

I know you're trying to see as much as you can in one image but it looks distorted. Straightening the verticals will help.

Keep posting

[camionero]

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mmm yea maybe its too much the fov is set to 40 or 45 dont remember...
THX for your comments!!

[arqestevez1]

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hi man...
i think the car is too shiny... it's a generall thing of he car paint materials... i don't think they should be soo clean and perfect.
the asphalt looks good, but the brick material... it looks a little low resolution...
i´m gessing you used a bump map... have you though of using a displacement?
look... i do not mean to be rude... hehe, and i'm no expert, but i think that this sceene could be better i you take a little more time with the mapping... look for example to the element in the building that is closet to the camera in the third story... you can see how the brick map doesn't end well... in the picture we can see only a third part of the brick where there should be one :P
tree is looking great...
did you make a photoshop post process?

[aser28]

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Brick sizes not right and also windows need some reflection, All will be good if you get proposition right like furniture sizes.