university gymnasium

[edvis]

Hi all a recent work, c&c's would be greatly appreciated..

[Chisel]

Re: university gymnasium

Like the design but maybe a visible background with a sky would help the appearance. The grass is also a bit flat good image non the less.

[arqestevez1]

Re: university gymnasium

it´s looking great
i like the model

[sebekf]

Re: university gymnasium

This is sufficient form how to present ideas. Nice render , I like the atmosphere of the picture.
You could work on grass material.
BTW how much PS work did you do on picture?

[teofas]

Re: university gymnasium

very nice model and render, maybe you can improve the grass and add some more contras on the jpgs trees.
greetings!

[ken28875]

Re: university gymnasium

Nice render, edvis.

I would suggest to make the trees and plants different and unique to give a more realistic feel. They are very repetitive right now. If they are 3D objects, you can rotate them to create different trees from one tree. If they are 2D/alpha planes, you can fix them in Photoshop my painting over your render.

Have a nice day,

_KN

[isapot]

Re: university gymnasium

Hi all, thanks for the cc's,
Ken, the trees are png images, you are right I think I have to change them.
master Teof, the grass are vray materials with bump but the results are not that good so I think I have to PS them.
Jarynzleza, thank this is a design I made for a client glad you like it, for post pro, I did line overlay, sharpening, photo filter and diffuse glow, and also added the background trees.
Arqesteves, thanks man
chisel, thanks man, this is the only background image I got I think I have to look for a better one, maybe a campus scene.

[DaveReyes]

Re: university gymnasium

Nice design and render bro!!! congratulations.
Keep it UP

[KELPER]

Re: university gymnasium

maybe a little bit more pH work create an scenario more real..looks not real...