back of a house

[arturmf]

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[matus.nedecky]

Re: back of a house

remove the guy in red swimming suit and just then we can talk about render tweaks

[frip51]

Re: back of a house

Nice melons.

Oh wait... it's coconuts.

[arqestevez1]

Re: back of a house

jajajajajajajaja
i agree with nedecky jajaja

[arturmf]

Re: back of a house

hehehehe...

why guys? rs

But ok. Forget the man with red suit

[Micha_cg]

Re: back of a house

Why are the coco nuts labeled with the image of a coconut tree?

[arturmf]

Re: back of a house

Hello,

i think you liked more the coco nut than all...

Micha, i dont know....came from archmodels models

[matus.nedecky]

Re: back of a house

OKAY
Maybe the texture came with archmodels, but it doesn't mean you have to use it as texture
-Fix the texture at coconuts.
-use some background - some clouds would be really nice.
-top up subdivs at your material reflection layers from 8 to somewhere like 22 or 32 (as needed)
-I don't think there are used in real world flowers under palms - this looks unreal. Or maybe it is color which makes them to look unreal.
-I don't like the watter rippleing in the bath tub, I think calm water should be better in this scene.
-I don't think the palm in the pot looks real, the geometry looks very weird, you should delete this one
-use some materials on the cushions - in this scene I would prefer the first one from these: http://www.flyingarchitecture.com/materials-fabric/
-use some reflection layer on the ground - is it actually a stone? I think in the third view it is too tiled (not seamless)
-is there any material applied to railings of the balcony (I mean frames for glass at balcony - I have no ide how do you call it in English.)
-I don't like repeating texture of the bamboo (is it a bamboo?) on the right side in the first image.
-Make some color corrections, make those colors warmer. I can see water, sun, summer, but I feel it is too cold in there.
-when making postpro, don't forget to add some glow and flare effects (but do not overact that!)

Hope these notes help at least a little bit!
looking forward to see fixed images

[arturmf]

Re: back of a house

Thanks Matus,

just some explanations: this images were for a client....and i had to do it in two or three days.... ???

However i appreciate your points!

What do you mean with flare? Sorry, i cant understand....

AND THANKs