composition have changed!

[DaveReyes]

Which design is better? its all about composition and I prefer the first one but opinions in this forum for me are very important.


http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8...ndproppsal.jpg



http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/9...pectivecam.jpg


http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/6...psreadytre.jpg


http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7...1fppsready.jpg

[teofas]

Re: House Exteriors, MBproject

nice exterior bro, i think that the last one is a little too crisp, and also i think that something in the background would look nice and not only the clouds cause for me this always gives the effect of a floating house, the rocks needs some work on texture cause looks too flat, grass is great!

[DaveReyes]

Re: House Exteriors, MBproject

Thanks for your comments Teo I always admire your words, I need to improve using photoshop I always have issues in the postprocessing part, what are you recomendations. something in the background like what bro?

[teofas]

Re: House Exteriors, MBproject

I also admire how you have improve so fast bro! about the background for example in the first image, maybe some trees, or other nearby house or some buildings, this will take out the floating in the sky effect...about postprocess is all about watching a lot of tutorials and most of all practice, im sure you will improve your ps skill, but it comes with time and practice, wich you are making very good job brother

[arqestevez1]

Re: House Exteriors, MBproject

it's looking great my friend... looking great.
for me, last image looks extremely realistic, but there are a few thing that you could improve.
you've really solved the grass issue with micha's method hhehe
did you watch the video that i sent you?
i think that if you make some small color corrections in photoshop your work will look better, also a few reflection on the plants. sometimes detail enhacement tends to reduce the reflective properties of materials.
one thing that i have to say, is that i really admire your design skills ;D

[DaveReyes]

Re: House Exteriors, MBproject

Thanks for your words Omar, Your words are true Inspiration for me, and yes I saw the video tut. you send me very helpful. And How I said before I need to learn more photoshop.

[sebekf]

Re: House Exteriors, MBproject

Hi dave, nice exterior renders as usual . I like the mood (soft light), grass and architecture. Good work. (some plants looks weird (aloe vera I think) - fist picture).

[DaveReyes]

Re: composition have changed!

Hello Jary. Im glad you like it how you can see I updated a new version with a different composition, what do you think?

[teofas]

Re: composition have changed!

i like the first one too

[DaveReyes]

Re: composition have changed!

Glad you like it, its a Honor coming from you Teo

[bazakontur]

Re: composition have changed!

the plants look really nice, I'm still working on it ...

[dcauldwell_cg]

Re: composition have changed!

Very nice renders. If you are using the Micha grass technique, which version of vray are you using. (I thought the Micha method was unusable after 01.05.30)

Thanks
David

[DaveReyes]

Re: composition have changed!

Sorry for the late response dcualdwell, by the way Im using 1.05 michas method doesnt works in the latest version.
thanks for your comments they are very apriciated.