MODERN EXTERIOR - any comments to improve?

[pandahorde]

ABOUT THE PIC:
*its just a preview visoft
*not yet photoshop specially on the grass
*not yet edited just a preview
*obviously not final render (im going to use veri good visoft -eventhough it takes long to render and load)
*no Ambient Onclussion yet ..thats why ..its not yet detailed

SO What should we do?
*please make a comment what should i do to improve the residential presentation.. is the perspective view ok? the lightning and shadows ok? the location of landscape ok? the color ok? the textures ok? the background ok? etc..

[pandahorde]

Re: MODERN EXTERIOR - any comments to improve?

no reply? but 20+ views?

[derek_bandit]

Re: MODERN EXTERIOR - any comments to improve?

can you post the pic on the site please, not external link please

[pandahorde]

Re: MODERN EXTERIOR - any comments to improve?

can u see the image now?

[derek_bandit]

Re: MODERN EXTERIOR - any comments to improve?

no.. what i meant , you need to copy the image code onto your post buddy

[pandahorde]

Re: MODERN EXTERIOR - any comments to improve?

now its done. the image is properly seen

[derek_bandit]

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thank... i can see it. well done

[derek_bandit]

Re: MODERN EXTERIOR - any comments to improve?

angle looks little weird, forced view, try an eye level view or something. window frame looks like stainless steel edit material , overall colors looking good, some materials need more work, asphalt, stone cladding, needs a bump or displacement, lighting & shadow looks perfect for exterior, some spots or noise on the darker material, grass needs bump, too much reflection on the windows, try a different glass for the window perhaps

[pandahorde]

Re: MODERN EXTERIOR - any comments to improve?

angle looks little weird, forced view, try an eye level view or something. window frame looks like stainless steel edit material , overall colors looking good, some materials need more work, asphalt, stone cladding, needs a bump or displacement, lighting & shadow looks perfect for exterior, some spots or noise on the darker material, grass needs bump, too much reflection on the windows, try a different glass for the window perhaps

OMG.. thanks a lot of your comment sir.. the shadow and grass is not yet been final. so you mean mans eye view ..and yes its stainless thx im going to work on asphalt .and stone cladding thx sir.

[derek_bandit]

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hope the advice helps buddy.. happy rendering, im looking forward to you improve renders

[steelers05]

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yeah the angle is the biggest concern with this image....if you actually divide it up on screen, the weakest parts of the rendering (the grass & Concrete) take up about 1/3 of your image. That is not necessarily good. Make the building your focus, because that has a lot more interest and quality to it. Good start though. Keep pushing