BK interior WIP

[bazakontur]

Welcome
I'm working on that render. What should I do better. I am very keen to improve these imperfections/ Comments and opinions on this subject are welcome
Settings, interior model, render: BazaKontur, Vray 1.48.



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[jamaliutlo]

Re: BK interior WIP

GOOD WORK
BUT YOU MUST CARE TO COLOR IN RENDER YOU HAVE TOO MUCH BLUE COLOR IN YOUR RENDER :'(
YOU CAN REPAIR THIS PROBLEM IN PHOTOSHOP
I EDIT YOU PHOTO AND I GOT THIS



GOOD LUCK ;D

[bazakontur]

Re: BK interior WIP

thank you

I can improve this problem and I improve this with the next edition

something else? :

[sebekf]

Re: BK interior WIP

my quick edit


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I would think about design of the room at first. the carpet looks great .

[40th]

Re: BK interior WIP

Very nice render.
I agree with jamaliutlo on the bluish lightning.
I also think that the chair is too much in the middle of the image, composition wise.
Really like the carpet, can you share it please?

[bazakontur]

Re: BK interior WIP

Of course, I will try today to send to the carpet for a private message

greetings

[rodnez]

Re: BK interior WIP

Did you use displacement on the carpet? How long was the render time? Great image!

[maciek_maciek]

Re: BK interior WIP

tak ogólnie render wygląda nieźle, można jeszcze sporo wycisnąć w postpro, jeżeli mam się czepiać to mógłbyś poprawić materiały, wydaje mi się, że ściana i fotel zlewają się, ścianka za tv ma chyba za mocnego bumpa. dywan daje radę!

nie chcę ci śmiecić w temacie więc dam link, szybki edit:
http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4...nteriorwip.png

[bazakontur]

Re: BK interior WIP

Did you use displacement on the carpet? How long was the render time? Great image!

yes, I use displacement map, 2 hours, thx :

p8700 - 2.53 ghz
ram (4gb)

tak ogólnie render wygląda nieźle, można jeszcze sporo wycisnąć w postpro, jeżeli mam się czepiać to mógłbyś poprawić materiały, wydaje mi się, że ściana i fotel zlewają się, ścianka za tv ma chyba za mocnego bumpa. dywan daje radę!

nie chcę ci śmiecić w temacie więc dam link, szybki edit:
http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4...nteriorwip.png

Właśnie masz się czepiać Zmniejszę tego bumpa, może większy gloss jak sądzisz?

Twój edit wygląda świetnie, ścianka za telewizorem jest naprawdę fajnie wyeksponowana, jestem ciekawy czy osiągnę taki efekt z "balansem kolorów" - dzięki

[shoopa]

Re: BK interior WIP

I don`t wanna mess too, but..
I agree with jarynzlesa
think about `design`or maybe composition/camera view..:

Ies lights not necessary in that place /especially above the tv!/
/i feel like many people HAVE TO put an ies light into the scene just because it might look cool.
look for the references-does every interior has ies lights? /
also the standing lamp in the centre is kind a strange

visibility - try to show the whole fotel/lounge chair or show a little more of it
red chair should also be visible totally, not cutted in the bottom - in this situation its like taking a photo of a person and cutting that person`s feet out

my edit here /verticals should be vertical!/
/maciek edit is ok, but still to cold [@maciek - its an international forum, prawda? and polish language is not one of the most used language in the world.../

[bazakontur]

Re: BK interior WIP

I don`t wanna mess too, but..
I agree with jarynzlesa

I agree with Jarynzlesa ... together compose the structure of wood is not necessarily the color. Wall - Background, cabinet - the accent, the rest is white and gray colors.

visibility - try to show the whole fotel/lounge chair or show a little more of it
red chair should also be visible totally, not cutted in the bottom - in this situation its like taking a photo of a person and cutting that person`s feet out

I agree

Ies lights not necessary in that place /especially above the tv!/
/i feel like many people HAVE TO put an ies light into the scene just because it might look cool.
look for the references-does every interior has ies lights? /
also the standing lamp in the centre is kind a strange

it's just training

thx