Small retail development visual

[ibuild]

Hey all this is an image I produced for a small retail development soon to be built.

Any comment welcome

Thanks...


Untitled by hornhead2002, on Flickr

[deanfitton]

Re: Small retail development visual

Do Sainsburys now have express stores dedicated especially to only selling varieties of berries now?

[ibuild]

Re: Small retail development visual

It appears so... I had to alter the logo for copyright reasons, but give the client a decent impression of what the signage would look like. If you look closely, the unit next door is 'P'ominos pizza

[focpt]

Re: Small retail development visual

I like it, looks great. For me, the sun ray effect needs to be stronger/different - or just take it out altogether. The pin stripe line seams out of place.

Cheers.