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[N4dputdown]

Hello everyone,

My name is Salaheddine and i'm 19 years old. I study Architecture in The Netherlands and I like it a lot.
I have been doing this render thing with V-ray for a while, but didn't have enough time to complete my first project. Finally I got a week off, so I spended a lot of hours ( slept like 3 hours in two days haha ) the last two days to complete it. I really enjoy doing this.

(The project below is my room made in Sketchup)

Here are 4 renders I made. I wrote below the underneath pic's the things that didn't work or aren't nice yet.
So I will really appreciate your comments and tips!



The chair 'leather' material didn't work. It doesn't look realistic. And I forgot to give the bed and pillow a good texture. In the next pictures I did use them. So i need to renew this one.



I don't know how to let the iMac screen glow a little bit. Any Ideas? I also want the TV glowing in the previous render.



The side of the TV screen isn't beautiful. Maybe I should search for a better one.



The window with the mountain view in the back is actually in reality a door for entering my bedroom.


But I am very satisfied for a first time. Soon I will post more renders.

- Salaheddine

[teofas]

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nice start bro! Just increase the subdivision to avoid noise, also images for me are little dark, exterior images need to increase the ilumination, as you say they are photos you can edit them in ps. and try to use some highpoly components, you can download good ones on archive3D.net

[N4dputdown]

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Thankyou Teo for your comment and tips.

I've made another render, and I think it's a lot better now.
There is one 'but'. And that is the render time. The first ones took like 5 minutes per render.
And the last one, ( render underneath with other settings ) took almost 6 hours!

[N4dputdown]

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Worked on the lightning and materials;





Clickable for bigger picture.

[teofas]

Re: N4dputdown's Gallery

great bro, lightning is much better, now materials need some work, increase the subd in the ones with noise, and add an emisive layer to the tv and computer screen to make them more real

[N4dputdown]

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Thanks Teo, I really appreciate your comment..

I did what you suggested, only the chair didn't work out very well.
But this was the last render of this project. I will design something else now and practice.



- Salah