beach house

[abiyari]

hi all, im new to this great forum, and I feel a little sorry for posting my work here because I'm extremely good at the 3D world, I'm Mexican and really publish my work because I want to be even half good that most of you, I look forward to your comments and thanks in advance.



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[teofas]

Re: beach house

Hola Abiyari gusto de verte por aca amigo, me gusta como se ve la volumetria en la 3era imagen, el diseño es tuyo? Saludos y bienvenido!

Very nice design bro, and nice renders, welcome to the forum!

[abiyari]

Re: beach house

Hola Abiyari gusto de verte por aca amigo, me gusta como se ve la volumetria en la 3era imagen, el diseño es tuyo? Saludos y bienvenido!

Very nice design bro, and nice renders, welcome to the forum!

Hola teo mil gracias por tus comentarios, no el diseño no es mio es un modelo de la 3dwarehouse, me gusto y decidi tomarlo para practicar, quisiera algun dia hacer render aunque sea a la mitad de buenos como los tuyos, ahora estoy tratando de entender mas acerca del comportamiento de los materiales, y pues espero lograr entender bien en funcionamiento general de Vray..

[teofas]

Re: beach house

Tal vez un poco menos de bump en algunos materiales sea bueno...estoy seguro que con tiempo y practica lograras excelentes resultados amigo!

Maybe less bump IMO, but again nice job bro!

[pacha]

Re: beach house

It's a very nice job, but I have two comments:
- the stone in the lower parts of the house looks very routinely repeated ( you should work it out in PS. for example).
- You should also improve the grass.

The rocks in the 2nd image look fantasitic.

Keep posting

[abiyari]

Re: beach house

It's a very nice job, but I have two comments:
- the stone in the lower parts of the house looks very routinely repeated ( you should work it out in PS. for example).
- You should also improve the grass.

The rocks in the 2nd image look fantasitic.

Keep posting

many thanks for taking time to go to see this work and even more for comment, their comments helped me a lot like those of theo for my next rendering, really many thanks, I look forward to more of their valuable opinions

[abiyari]

Re: beach house

Tal vez un poco menos de bump en algunos materiales sea bueno...estoy seguro que con tiempo y practica lograras excelentes resultados amigo!

Maybe less bump IMO, but again nice job bro!

gracias teo de verdad agradesco tus opiniones ya que desde mas de un año he seguido tu trabajo y sencillamente se me hace genial...