one more kithen...

[arqestevez1]

Hello guys, this is the kitchn of the second story of a house i'm making...
it's a really small area, the idea was to create an open space to make it feel larger and brighter.
feel free to leave your comment.

[skurl]

Re: one more kithen...

hi ARQESTEVEZ, nice render, just a few things though, it feels a bit plastic, you added too much sharpen, the white wall to the left over the sofa seems burnt a bit, the details in the cabinetry seems lost, like edges on the cupboard,kool design none the less

[arqestevez1]

Re: one more kithen...

hey shawn, thank you for your reply.
it became so heavy that i could not handle it, it does looks too white, youre right, and i did loose detail of the kitchen gabinets. i'll try too improve for the next one

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Re: one more kithen...

the model u used for this is big?

[rodnez]

Re: one more kithen...

Hi Omar, is a nice scene in my opinion and i think Shawn have said almost everything. I found some noise nearby the dining table and the couches looks a bit like floating. I'm guessing that you did this in a really short time but still is a nice render.
Cheers

[arqestevez1]

Re: one more kithen...

270 mb... and the render does not take so much time, but it does not start quickly... i have to wait like 10 minutos for the frame buffer to appear... so it is kind of hard to work with this... it's because of the kitchen components, they're too high poly... also i started it last night (sunday) at... well, like 7 or 8 p.m., and i finished it at... 2 or 3 a.m.
thank ou for your replies, i'll try to improve i swear :P

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Re: one more kithen...

damm, thats too much, i believe that render will take that time, i think you should use lower polly objects although the hugh polly ones from max are so good

[arqestevez1]

Re: one more kithen...

yep... lately i've learned a lot, also took the interior training, but it is hard to keep realism when the model gets so big, wich is really often in my case hehe
thank you for your replies

[smai]

Re: one more kithen...

hi ARQESTEVEZ, nice render, just a few things though, it feels a bit plastic, you added too much sharpen, the white wall to the left over the sofa seems burnt a bit, the details in the cabinetry seems lost, like edges on the cupboard,kool design none the less

hey, How are you doing Omar? Agree with Shawn. Love the bottle of water in the kitchen.

[arqestevez1]

Re: one more kithen...

hehehe thank you, i could't create the plastic material, so i just made it cristal :P