Here are the interiors - 2 Cofee Shop (too red)

[aijuna]

Hello people, it's time to do inside, in this case is an indoor pool in the area of ​​common services of an apartment building, I hope you like it

C & C are welcome

[teofas]

Re: Here are the interiors - 1 Pool

Hi Ricardo, its looking good bro, some feedbacks: the sky image is not very good cuality, theres a lot of noise in the ceiling, the spots dosent seen to be spreading any lights, floor material looks great but looks dangerous for a pool area and the chairs on the background looks weird over there. Good image anyway

[aijuna]

Re: Here are the interiors - 1 Pool

Thanks for the comments Teo!, I hope you have understood that heaven is not heaven really is a false ceiling painted on the ceiling and the chairs of the fund are the same as those in the foreground, perhaps by the angle of camera are well.
The noise from the roof may be by the reflexes that is, to assist in the lighting and wider feeling.

[teofas]

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oh i didnt know sky was painted, and about the chairs what i mean is that they are in a corner that looks like an odd place to put them

[aijuna]

Re: Here are the interiors - 1 Pool

The idea of heaven is to do something as seen in some hotels in Las Vegas but on a much smaller scale, to play with the feeling outside.
The chairs, I understand, is just one sector of relaxation, that this plant not only has a swimming pool or not, also spa, and various types of showers, there one could sit and read a book or just hang out.

[teofas]

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oh ok i get it bro, btw did you design it?

Ah ya entiendo, creo que mejor escribo en español, porque en ingles a veces es confuso hehe....a lo que me refiero es que el lugar donde las pusiste, es decir las tumbonas, creo que se ve muy apretado y lo que te comentaba del piso creo que ese tipo de piso estaria muy resbaloso para ponerlo en un area de alberca. pero bueno en general la imagen va muy bien richie, saludos amigo!

[aijuna]

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The building belongs to the studio where I work, but you can say that design is mine and to take the dediciones of materials, lighting and textures.
(Part of 14-story building posted on the external thread I did a few weeks ago)
The truth that yes, the chairs seem to be tight there, but like I said it for a while lying down reading a book or something like that any more and also to avoid the waste that space.
The floor if it feels dangerous, but surely the marble actually have some special treatment that is not as slippery.
On the other hand I think the picture is so complete, as it is only a rendering to show the idea of ​​customer space.



El edificio pertenece al estudio donde trabajo, pero se puede decir que el diseño es mió ya que tome las dediciones de materiales, iluminación y texturas, etc.
(Forma parte del edificio de 14 pisos posteado en el hilo de exteriores que hice hace unas semanas)
La verdad que si, las tumbonas parecen estar apretadas ahÃ, pero como te dije es para estar recostado un rato leyendo un libro o algo asà nada mas y también para no desaprovechar ese espacio.
El piso si, da la sensación de peligroso, pero en realidad el mármol seguramente tendrá algún tratamiento especial para que no sea tan resbaladizo.
Por otro lado creo que la imagen quedara asi finalizada, ya que solo es un render para mostrar la idea del espacio al cliente.


http://forum.asgvis.com/index.php?topic=10308.0

[nawaitsa_cg]

Re: Here are the interiors - 1 Pool

its marvelous render bro,, just one input from me try reduce the intensity od the emisive light on the ceiling edge,,, I think the white light emisive is too overbright.

[aijuna]

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nawaitsa: thanks for the advice!

Here's another interior, is a cafe and ice cream shop, the abundance of red is not my fault at all

C & C are welcome

PS: these images have very little editing in photoshop, only an adjustment of lighting, in both cases, I think I'm improving my settings.

[teofas]

Re: Here are the interiors - 2 Cofee Shop (too red)

very nice image ricardo! only feedback is the noise in the chairs and in the metal of the chairs also the spot lights intensity is very low

[aijuna]

Re: Here are the interiors - 2 Cofee Shop (too red)

Yeeea the f***ing IES
The material of the chairs I am mistaken, because it is the same as that of the wall, but of course if you lit this sector otherwise the materials do not behave the same way.

[teofas]

Re: Here are the interiors - 2 Cofee Shop (too red)

Yeeea the f***ing IES

hehehe yes sometimes somethings came with some frustration

si te entiendo amigo, yo apenas empeze con la nueva version pero no todo sale como uno quisiera