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  • Sitting area and kitchen

    Here is a third view of a series of images I am doing for an elder care. This interior stuff is a lot more difficult than exterior, at least for me, but I am getting better

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    Bobby Parker
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    ok, i think you really need to do something with the lights.. they r looking flat white.. so if you are using vray light material.. may b use some texture thr.. Also, i think reflection of lights on ceiling wood need to be controlled.. it is distracting.. overall i think it can be improved but you are getting better for sure
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    • #3
      Hi,
      It's not bad as a render, but there is a lot of potential for photoshop here. If you don't mind, here is my try.
      What I noticed, the lights should have a different color than the outside, more orange. It would look nice and moody if the outside was darker, like dawn.
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      • #4
        I used a photo, as a reference, for the lights. I'll work on the image, when I get some time. Thanks Marc; does everyone agree that Marc's improved the image?

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        Bobby Parker
        www.bobby-parker.com
        e-mail: info@bobby-parker.com
        phone: 2188206812

        My current hardware setup:
        • Ryzen 9 5900x CPU
        • 128gb Vengeance RGB Pro RAM
        • NVIDIA GeForce RTX 4090 X2
        • ​Windows 11 Pro

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        • #5
          Yeah, marc's image looks better. I think the problem with the lights is that besides being too white, they glow white as well. In the lights in your sample image, the glow from them is much smaller and is a nice yellow/orange. In addition the where the lights in the image are not pure white they also go the same yellow/orange. Maybe a falloff map in the vraylight material would help to achieve this.
          www.dpict3d.com - "That's a very nice rendering, Dave. I think you've improved a great deal." - HAL9000... At least I have one fan.

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          • #6
            Updated interior lobby

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            Here is an update
            Bobby Parker
            www.bobby-parker.com
            e-mail: info@bobby-parker.com
            phone: 2188206812

            My current hardware setup:
            • Ryzen 9 5900x CPU
            • 128gb Vengeance RGB Pro RAM
            • NVIDIA GeForce RTX 4090 X2
            • ​Windows 11 Pro

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            • #7
              It's looking good
              Could do with being a little brighter in places though - I'd push the midtones right up and paint a soft brush mask where it gets blown out.

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              • #8
                Wow, what an amazing improvement. Nice work.

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                Mike
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                • #9
                  Thanks, guys!
                  Bobby Parker
                  www.bobby-parker.com
                  e-mail: info@bobby-parker.com
                  phone: 2188206812

                  My current hardware setup:
                  • Ryzen 9 5900x CPU
                  • 128gb Vengeance RGB Pro RAM
                  • NVIDIA GeForce RTX 4090 X2
                  • ​Windows 11 Pro

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