Wisconsin grocery store

[glorybound]

Good morning and happy Friday!

Here is a grocery store I have been working on.

[glorybound]

I need to do some post, people, and stuff. The trees are probably going to change and maybe a little DOF on the foreground. You guys always contribute in a way that makes my images better so any help would be greatly appreciated.

[BBB3]

I like it, and I like the post you did on it.
If I were picky I would say three things could be tweaked: the trees seem a bit out of scale, looking at the leaves; the car in the foreground is probably too close to the camera for the amount of detail it has; and the road could probably do with less reflectivity. Other than that, very nice.

[glorybound]

Thank you BB3!

The trees are hugs and I was going to change those out for better ones. I was going to add detail to the road in post and tweak the color, but I want the image to be approved before I spend any more time in post. The project was fun, but caused the anxiety with a short deadline. I modeled from drawing files in a day (14hrs) and texture mapped in a day (8hrs).

[3DMK]

Hey nice work Bobby!

I can really see an improvement in your work over the last 6-months. You must be working hard so here is a nice pat on the back & congratulations.

Jamie

[glorybound]

Hey nice work Bobby!

I can really see an improvement in your work over the last 6-months. You must be working hard so here is a nice pat on the back & congratulations.

Jamie

Thanks! I have friends who are starting to do decent work nativity in Revit, with almost one click, so I feel like I have to get really good if I want to be effective.

[lukx]

Nice one Bobby !. I agree with Bertrand about the road too reflective. WHat about you try trick form movies? They alwasy make road wet like after rain in some places. Also maybe drop some tree shadows form behind the camera on the ground.

[glorybound]

Nice one Bobby !. I agree with Bertrand about the road too reflective. WHat about you try trick form movies? They alwasy make road wet like after rain in some places. Also maybe drop some tree shadows form behind the camera on the ground.

I am not sure I understand

[lukx]

the wet part or tree shadows?
wet: http://answers.yahoo.com/question/in...8222236AAUAYgS

http://wallpaperstock.net/xf-on-wet-...280x960_1.html

tree shadows behind the camera:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/eabdesi...n/photostream/

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update

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tree shadows behind the camera:

but the light source isn't behind the camera

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the wet part

I used this technique awhile back, that worked, I think.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/whitebi...os/5057911232/

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I was getting the white halo around everything, even the grass against the pavement. I haven't had this in a ling time... what is the fix?

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here is a little useless tilt-shift

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Shopping Mall

Am I moving in the correct direction on this?