Light House Yacht Club

[glorybound]

Here is a scene I am working through. I am going to try somethings less dramatic, but I thought I would give this one a chance. I couldn't figure out why the roof was casting such a strong shadow; it's a reflection, not a shadow . I'll post updates.

[joconnell]

Looks really good - you'r exposure gets better each new thing you work on! is the roof made of a really shiny material or a slate? I'd introduce some glossiness and ideally variance into the levels of reflection on that one - even possibly a very soft but large bump to take some of the perfection away from it?

[glorybound]

you'r exposure gets better each new thing you work on!

Thanks.. I got really good in Photoshop . The roof is asphalt and I had to much reflection on the material. I have fixed that and I am re-rendering it now.

[flino2004]

Bobby, I think something is not working well with your farm, I can see some buckets there...there is a group in the top middle but they are all over the sky
Nice rendering by the way!!!

[glorybound]

the sky was done in post so I think it is just a bad image file

Bobby, I think something is not working well with your farm, I can see some buckets there...there is a group in the top middle but they are all over the sky
Nice rendering by the way!!!

[glorybound]

Updated Yacht render

Here is a new view, and a different feel, for the yacht club rendering.

[wxyz]

Really liked the first image you posted

[glorybound]

me too, but the architect went crazy over the new one. The next thing he'll ask for is a SE ISO

[tarontis]

I much prefer the new render, the textures have more depth and look more realistic, plus the trees make it look a lot more vibrant and inviting.

[flino2004]

I like the view nd the quality of the model and rendering in general but I have 3 thing that I think need more work
-Saturation is too high
-the water looks like metal
-the flag looks very CG...(material and model)

[glorybound]

-Saturation is too high

I have heard this comment on my other images. I have already de-saturated it by 25%. Do you guys typically de-saterate your images a lot? how much?

[glorybound]

Yacht Club - road side

Here is the road side of the same project. I am waiting feedback from the architect so I thought I would take the opportunity to get the priceless feedback I get here, too.

[flino2004]

it looks very good... I would match the quality that you have here to the other view.
well done bobby!!

[glorybound]

Thanks. I notice my cars are out of scale. I haven't heard back from the architect, but he is usually pretty easy to impress.

[glorybound]

updated road side view