Old window - Finished

[Tabajara]

whatz up dudes?

I did this image this afternoon just for fun, i take about 1:30 hours produce the scene and 30 minutes of render on an old k6II 500mhz, hope everybody like Crititcs & comments are vey welcome.

[dusan]

I'd try pushing the cage a bit more towards the wall, from this angle it looks like it sticks up too much.

Cool work.

[lordshaitan]

This definatly needs mroe texture work. mostly around the window to show age on the wall.

Also, it looks as though the window isnt casting a shadow.

[J_Bug]

Usually when I see this type of bars (rebar I think) they have a definite cross hatch type pattern and then you see rust on top of that.

--Jon

[Tabajara]

thanks evrybody for the coments i have fixed all the bugs and changed the perspective.

here is my final image



hope everybody like

[vince_1972]

very nice now

good lighting ang textures

congrats

Vince

[Junglejuz]

lovely texture work. My only critic would be that it looks miniature because the texturing is very course. If this is the effect you wanted then ignore my comment.

Justin

[ravexl]

[Zero One 010110]

Well i think that for an afternoon of playing with it, it is more than a fair shot, i usually make a test on somethings i have in my mind and then just erase them, but i think that yours came along really great, the texture reminded me of those little little towns in the center part of Mexico, little constructions that were forgotten, but still remains, (without the bars of course)

Cya