French Project

[benino69]

Crits welcom

thx

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[hughg]

not bad work man!
The green grass needs variation..
a lot of repetition of textures on foreground surfaces...ie road and parking areas....
Sky blue is way too flat ...
but in the meantime you should take them into photoshop and duplicate layer and use the overlayer option on the duplicated layer. Add a tiny blur and some noise, destaurate a little.
you would be suprised with the results.......


regards


Hughg

[J_Bug]

I disagree with hughg about the sky. It looks good with the subtle gradient in the second image.

I really like how the light falls across the large curved wall in the second render but there seems to be a problem with the same wall in the first. Can you see that large hotspot on the far end of the wall?

I don't understand that wall with the musical instruments on it. It looks like a memorial of sorts but the large images look different in each render and they also look like they are comped in Photoshop or something.

--Jon

[Bratwurst]

Very nice render and quite interesting architecture Did it take long?

Cheers