exterior!

[mutzinguy]

critic me.

[davis]

critic huh??
why did you take a pic and post it for a rendering?? only problem.. a little dark.



good very good
da

[marowak]

the courtains have shadows and the building dont have enought to make those courtains like that

the car refections are white whil the windosw are blue

[nully]

I think you need to work on the textures especially the brickwork and the paving, the sky blue reflection in the glass doesnt match your background I think if you sort those 2 issues out you'll be getting somewhere

[J_Bug]

The bkgrnd match is a little off. Possibly the lens angle too?

If you're using a target cam maybe just move it down some.

--Jon

[swenson]

Looks good.

Looks to me like the sky color and reflection on the cars is an overcast day...or slightly overcast. Your shadows on the building are a little out of sync with this environment if that is the case. I would try area shadows maybe?

Very good job.

Swenson

[TutanMark]

Hi, it looks good... i agree with shadows ... and the bricks are too clean for me.... my opinion is to try with some noise.

Marco

[andrius]

Looks good.

I agree with all above comments, but I would like to add the people look too low or something...

[mutzinguy]

thanks for your advices. i'll post it again.