illustrations : Sports hall

[ipo]

Hi all,
Here are some illustrations i've done recently.
Comments are always welcome !

[kriscabrera15]

some nice work you got there! really like the feel

[mikeh]

The shadows on the people in the first one seriously conflict with each other.
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[pailhead]

I like the second one best. The first one is great but ruined by the people. The people in the second one could perhaps use some lighting painted on them but they blend with the scene. I find the girl in the 3rd one a tad distracting. I'd add some reflection to the lines in the last.

[Morne]

Looks nice. How much of the landscape is 3D and how much is photoshop? In 2nd image I would take out the guy on the left, and move the girl close to the right and closer to they guy sitting, she looks odd standing there. In last image those lines bug me. It looks like you extruded them a bit much, they look like felt or cheap carpet. What works well is if you subtract it from the floor and layer it into the floor OR make with textures into your floor textures using various masks for the different colour lines. But I understand we all have deadlines and sometimes we have to cheat stuff to get the job done. I like the overall look and feel

[ledisnomad]

Nice stuff! Really nice.
I second all the comments and critiques so far, especially the painted lines in the last image. My only additional comment is on the last image: I find the texture of the concrete on the wall a little too much. Other than that, great job!

[prateekvishwa]

i like interiors very much. Specially the flooring of second image. Also grass in 3rd image is awesome! is it 3d or image based?

[ipo]

Thanks all for your comments !
About people on 1st image : well I admit there is something strange ... Maybe there is not enough diffuse shadows on the ground, they looks like flying ... But shadows are well oriented, I guess lines on the floor may disturb that.
For the colored lines in the last image, they are renerable max splines with 0,1 height, 0,1mm upon each others, and yes I can see a 0,5mm shadow on the right. I think I have to find i way remove them from shadows calculations.
All veget on 3rd image is forestpackpro, exept hedges.
I note all your comments and I'll try to fix them all on future works.