Schröder House

[pedersen]

Hi all!

First real try on making a exterior image w/vray,
so any c&c are welcome

cheers

Pedersen

[stellar]

Hi

i pretty much like the de stijl architecture.
it looks like a model, that's not bad but i'm not sure if that's what you are after.

I'd say that the hood somehow looks incoherent to the overall style and your fences up front look faceted, undetailed and floating at the right bottom of the image.

seems like a lot of criticsm but i liked looking at your picture.

[stephan_MA]

hey!

nice camera correction!



regards
s.wolf

[pedersen]

Hi!

hope this correction is a little bit better
keep coming with c&c.

regards

[kippu]

well just mi list of stuff that bothers me
a) the stones ...probably displacement required
b) DOF is making the building look like a model ...mebbe reduce it ....

its looking nice though.. should come out great ...

good luck

[RErender]

I agree with above, lose the dof for sure. Also on the composition why clip off the last 1% of that side? I think it would make more sense to show the rest of the chimney, and some nice displacement would look great against the sky.