Casa Mata redonda

[arqestevez1]

Hey guys, what's up.
this is the interior of a house i'm finishing.
Same girl reading in different topics
your comments are absolutely required :P
Cheers.

[fpedrogo]

really good render. Nice illumination, materials , etc. Very good.

[arqestevez1]

A lot of postproduction my friend.
what do you think i could improve? I posted it in evermotion and it does not seem to be good enough yet...
i know it's a simple design, but i´m tryn to reach some real realism.
Some people say it's good for vray for sketchup hehe... i don't think there can be much more to do with 3d max in such a small sceene...

[fpedrogo]

One of my recommendation is to round the corner of the wood cabinets. They look too perfect and it reduce the realism of the scene. The same thing with the walls. The table seem to be floating in the air, so maybe you can increase the GI setting or even use DE (details enchantment). Maybe move down the ceiling spotlight to create a small gap and produce a little bit of shadows to separate the lamp form the ceiling.
I hope this can help.

Best

[Newgate]

really nice bro, your leather material is awesome.

[andybot_cg]

Wow, super clean and nicely textured. One general critique is that it feels over-lit. I'd like to see more contrast in the image, some shadows maybe.

[arqestevez1]

Hey guys. I have another one in process.
thanks for your comments.
they have told me the same thing about the shadow of the small table. there is a shadow there, but it's kind of soft because there are a lot of lamps.
I think i need a little bit more illumination stuff, like ies, so i can reduce the gi a little bit and create some more ambient.
The truth is it is easy for me to create well illuminated sceenes, but when i have to reduce the illumination i just can't do it.
let me share you the raw render, i actually improved it a lot.
the leather does seem fine hehe, and i'm proud of it
next time i'll chamfer the corners... Fernando, about that, do you do that with a triangle section (i mean in the corners, to make the chamfer), or do you make an arc section?

[andybot_cg]

Omar, you really should try reducing your GI multiplier and see how the lighting is by itself. Right now, the GI seems to me too overpowering.

[fpedrogo]

Hi Omar

next time i'll chamfer the corners... Fernando, about that, do you do that with a triangle section (i mean in the corners, to make the chamfer), or do you make an arc section?

I use a free pulgin called "roundcorner"

http://sketchucation.com/forums/view...it=roundcorner

Best

[arcgraphics]

Hey guys, what's up.
this is the interior of a house i'm finishing.
Same girl reading in different topics
your comments are absolutely required :P
Cheers.

Hi mate, thats a great image as always my only comments would be that the image has a what I would describe as a greyish tint to it, also the shadow behind the girl is too light this needs to be darker to ground her into the scene.

I hope you don't mind, I did a few quick colour tweaks in lightroom to remove the grey tinge, darkened the shadow behind the girl and added some vignetting to direct the eye to the centre, I have attached the image below.

[arqestevez1]

hey thank you very much
i had seen your image but some times i can not answer from my cellphone
your image actually helped me a lot, i tried to improve it by myself with photoshop and i got a really great result.
I did´t share it because i had been away for a while, but it's in my Fb page.
thank you again for your advices, i have some new interesting projects and i'll try to make them better
see you guys around.

[nomeradona_cg]

Definitely one of the best render i have seen.

Nomer