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I'm sure you're done with it now, but there are a few things I think that could be improved...
The modelling around the doors and window frames is pretty spongy, which is exacerbated by the distortions in the reflections.
The tyres look very rigid/squared off, a little curve to the profile would help a lot. Personally, I like the white-wall tyres in the original concept but I understand that they might make it look less 'batman'.
The type on the walls of the tyres detracts a lot from the 50's style, the font looks out of place and mundane compared to the rest of the car. Also I think it would help if this sort of detail was modelled (or displaced) as that woul be more in-line with real tyres.
Finally (last comment, I swear!) I think the rear tyres scale could be pushed much further than you currently have them to help give it more style.
Sorry for the shopping list of comments, I just think it's a great idea and these things leapt out at me as I looked at it
Thanks for the comments - i was not happy with the tyres i find them quite tricky you're right about the roundness and scale! I will definatly revisit i think and address some of these!
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