Arch WIP

[Björn Radler]

Hi there,

i thought i had to post a WIP Archviz to get some feedback.

Please let me know what you think at this point.


Best regards

Björn

[s0real]

looks pretty good to me so far!

[glorybound]

I am having a hard time with the depth perception on the left. I spent a good amount of time thinking the scale was wrong, but then I realized you had a foreground tree. Maybe, you can desaturate the background trees, and saturate the foreground tree.

[Svetlozar Draganov]

The white and brown materials on the house are too perfect for me - it would be a good idea to break this perfection.
The same thing applies for the asphalt.
I can see that the front windows could be opened but there is no pathway out there

[Björn Radler]

Thx so far... i I will try to improve the scene when i find some time these days.

I will post an updaten soon

[Morne]

Looks nice. But the flower tree thing in the left foreground lookes too CG. Play with the textures a bit or just stick a real one there in post

And I agree with the comment about the doors that open onto the grass, how about a footpath or patio kinda thing?

[Subburb]

nice !! you didn't used the guess vertical option.. is it a choice ?
The foliage close on cam could receive a little defocus on it
Great work btw.