exterior renderings

[serge]

external rendering for promotion
critics and coments are welcome

[heroes5]

amazing works! the scene you made looks very very realistic!
congratulations!
&i want to know the plants on the back of building are map or model?
Is it possible to get them from somewhere?tks

[flipside]

Very nice.

I think both images could benefit from some levels adjustment in photoshop. Especially the second one needs much brighter/darker areas to be lit by the sun imo.

[natty]

yeah i agree ... the second image is missing something ...

[easee28]

hi

nice work serge but there is a huge problem of perspective in th second pic, background image don't have the good scale and got a wrong focale.
from where come your bushes , they are nice.

[serge]

thanks for the coments
made some correction to img2

bushes on the first img are from bionatics (max6)
the other trees are 2d from imagecells

[rogerfpolis]

A well-worked scene. A lot hard-work I guess. It's The 1st time I see an exterior scene with furniture inside!

You could only use Area Shadows to break those sharp raytraced shadows and deform the 2nd perspective a bit. I have the impression that the house is falling to the left side .

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Roger

[asango]

i agree with roger. looks like you verticals are off on the second image.

you can use technical camera to correct that.

check out this thread:
http://www.chaoticdimension.com/foru...chnical+camera

[freak]

i think the updated image for the second pic is still problematic.....the bakground photo doesnt fit the lighting....i think the problem is that u used redish color for the lights....u should use blue instead.....if u use red, it's not scientificly natural, because skylights r blueish.....

[gimiky]

great images.

i disagree with the comments on the background of the second image.. i think it looks great--the blueish haziness gives it a real feeling of depth. if anything, there's just a whole lot of 'mid ground' stuff that we're not seeing between the rendered image and the background image that makes it look contrasty.

that being said, it would be nice to see some more detail in the house geometry--especially on the roof/fascia. right now it looks like the roof tile is a flat plane with no dimension.

also, the old lady on the balcony in the first image looks extremely out of place and does more to hurt the image than to help it. the little boy looks a bit too large compared to his dad, and his foot is sinking a little too low for regular lawn grass.

aside from that, really nice job on these.

[stephan_MA]

i like the grass!

can you explain how you did it?

regards
s.wolf

[n6]

It is MY point of view but unless you take a photo of an infinite skycrapper, camera correction is absolutly usless for "human" scaled homes.