Yelow House - Litle job

[doriziofilho]

Hi people...
i to take heart and decide show my litle job...
critic and coments are necessary to grow up, and are welcome...
please...

[Gijs]

I don't see the pictures, had to copy and paste the link.

cam04: nice, apart from palmtrees --> too saturated
cam 02: here also, things tend to be too saturated. The shadows near the ceilings should be darker than farther away from the ceilings. Now it seems to be the other way around. The car in front has no materials except for the windows.

Gijs

[KenKoala]

yep

I agree with Gijs - too saturated
Roof tiling look good. Was the roof purposely made blotchy? good effect.
I dont know how your going to drive that ute/pick-up out from under the house with a column behind it?
Have you thought about flashing on the roof/wall intersections? I know flashing is ugly but it would add more realism to your work. What about downpipes/gutters/spreaders? These are only suggestions, not criticisms.
pardon the spelling.

Keep on keeping on
Kenny

[taboo]

cars looks like they are in the house.
not looking real to me..
it seems like bad architecture..

[TJE]

Did they park the car before they mounted the columns? Well, perhaps they just drove through the swimmingpool to get in there.

Sorry, didn't mean to joke about your picture, but there's something wrong with the carport...

The first picture is coming on nicely. I like your roof material, and the shadow tone is good. Perhaps a little more work on the wood material of the railing.

[easee28]

never seen a so crasy architecture.....

[Bratwurst]

Umm.. a little odd but it's kinda cute The render is pretty solid and I like the roof.