new building

[silver]

hello felows

there is a new job that i am working on, still need some improvements and i am rendering new views, so tell me your impressions in order to improve it.

thanks in advance

hugs
silver

[zuliban]

you are using very sharp lights make them less sharp and if you can make those textures whit disp they will look better nice work..

[cocolas]

overall I like it so far.....but there is something odd w/ the lighting.....it's as if you're not using GI or the lighting is a bit flat......and shadows a bit too crisp ('m refering to the fence shadows for example)....

maybe use a vray area light for your main lighting to get some more realistic shadows.......also use some displacement on the stone floor and the limestone retaining wall on the right to give them more volume....

I like the texturing and modeling...

paul.

[jacksc02]

Nice work silver, turn up your sunlight a bit to give a little contrast to your image.
Possibly think about shifting the position of the sun.
The tiling on the tall building in the background looks a little odd, maybe make the tiles a little smaller.

Keep up the great work

Chris Jackson
cj@arcad.co.nz
www.arcad.co.nz