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[percydaman]

A project Ive come back to over the last few days. Mostly happy with it, but any crits and suggestions are welcome




percy

[cocolas]

looks really good, percy!

are the cactuses on the left supposed to look fake/plastiky??
I also like the interior lighting....

great work!

paul.

[percydaman]

hehe of course they are! no really, the cactuses are by far the worst part of the image, but thought Id see if other people thought so as well. Ill see what I can do.


percy

[stellar]

wow nice crisp image percy

i loved the overall lighting very much

my only crits would be the camera's location being perfectly centered and the highlight on the black frame in the middle (and it's shadow which seems wrong)

[cocolas]

hehe of course they are! no really, the cactuses are by far the worst part of the image, but thought Id see if other people thought so as well. Ill see what I can do.
percy

sorry, i didn't mean it as a bad comment ........i really thought you wanted them to look plastiky....

to make them look real i think they need to be of a darker/deeper green...that's the first thing that trows me off.....

paul.