Please, don't critic the architecture

[vince_1972]

Hello,

My last work for a corporation of villas "key in hand". I specify that the design of the buildings does not come from us .

The whole work to been does in two days (modelling and rendering).



C&C welcomed

good week

Vince

[swenson]

My only critique would be the architecture..... Just kidding.

Grass looks good.

Lighting/shadows might be a little extreme, makes the RPC's really stick out.

The tiling on the driveways and the eave over the garage is very noticeable.

A very cheerful rendering overall.

[TJE]

I don't think those are RPC, but they should be colorcorrected in PS.
I disagree with swenson, I think you have good lighting. The only thing that disturbs the picture a little is the lack of stuff in the horizon - can't you put some trees there?

It reminds me of a very good french film I saw a while back... Betty Blue...

[TJE]

Oh, one more thing: The glass is a little dark, even where it reflects the sky...

[Ramsay]

Horizon line looks way too low!