WIP .........::::Prayer::::........

[Linda]

This is still a wip, going to put a lot of detail on this one, what im showing you is a blowup of the room the real scene is much bigger with more furniture and stuff everything is moddeled by me in max and rendered in vray offcourse, only the girl that i made in poser but clothing is moddeled in max and hair is painted in photoshop.

comments welcome.

[RErender]

Cute! only crit right now is the girls skin, looks more like a candle than skin, a bit too translucent.

[Neo2k1]

Great work spirit, as always

[Suiciety]

Silver,

Did you not read the thread in the forum about Poser models? Not allowed! Kidding!

I have to agree with RErender.....tone down the translucency....

I love the dress fabric! Did you use Simcloth for the bedspread?

Great stuff (so far), as usual! You bring a nice (and needed) female touch (detailing etc.) to the forum!

Keep it up!

[Linda]

Suiciety no simcloth pach moddeled.

[Linda]

Here is an update with some more stuff.

[dusan]

I still think the girl is kinda ghostly looking, too see-through . Great work, you are a really really tallented 3d artist. Modelling, texturing and lighting..
Are these cloth materials the same ones you posted earlier?

[losbellos]

second image is much better, but I still dont know, that she is before sleep or after sleep. Maybe a very slight sun beams would add to the holy atmosphere. Beautiful image, Beautiful theme.

[Linda]

Yes dusan i used the same technique for the cloth material as i did for the pillow just lowered some values.

thank's all for nice comments the final is soon finished.

[flipside]

It's indeed very detailed! But i think it needs more dramatic lighting (and also better AA but this is probabely because it's a WIP)

flipside

[Linda]

here is an update with other lightning more mysterious what du you think.

[Seraph135]

Your image is really starting to come together. The girls skin is still too translucent though. Also, be careful with the bed sheets cause they are starting to get a metalic looking highlight. Your horizon outside is too low. Use the window mullions as a guide for the horizons placement.

I don't know if photorealism is your goal with this or not. But I would suggest that you try a more saturated storybook color scheme and see what that does for you. I think a nice blue moonlight coming through the window and a yellow/orange lamp could really add to this already impressive image.

Tim J

[UBIKmh]

Apart from the technical critique given here, I'm missing a part of the window in the second version. The first version was very good, the focus goes to the girl praying. The whole atmosphere makes it a perfect illustration for a childrens book. In the second version I get distracted by the beautifully make lamp on the right. The girl praying becomes secundairy, pitty. With a little more window on the right you might be able to fix that.
But overall the image is of amazing quality.

Marc

[percydaman]

I agree with UBIKmh. Im not sure if its light out or dark. Theres so much light coming in from the window that it appears day, but the lamp is on which is distracting. The lamp is incredible, but might consider turning it off for the sake of the rest of the image.

Its a great image so far that has the potential to be even greater! Please keep working on it so that we can see it finished.

percy

[lordshaitan]

Spirit, i just saw that this got plugged on CGtalk. Congrats and as always a beautiful rendering.