Multimedia Classroom

[Guest]

hi there guys.
i am new with vray blender, and it is my first attempt using this combo.
this is an interior of multimedia classroom in a regional school in my country.
there's a little bit post pro in photoshop.
and i'm still learning, so any comments, crits, and suggestions from a professional view would be great.
anyway, thanks for andrey for making this great exporter. greetings from indonesia

[bdancer]

Re: Multimedia Classroom

Looks good =)

[Guest]

Re: Multimedia Classroom

Hi andrey.
thanks for fast reply.
anyway, may i ask you something? (it would be off topic, sorry..)
currently there is no texture slot on reflection glossiness (glossy brdf type) in layered material.
could you add that slot andrey?
that would be great.

[Jakerlund]

Re: Multimedia Classroom

Great render!

One thing though, it screams computer made picture.
In real life objects are usually placed a little bit randomly.
Chairs randomly turned and some closer to the table than others.
Some monitors further back/front and a little turned and maybe even one or two shut down or having a different screen/wallpaper.
And the same for the mice... basically like people actually have used the room.

Found this old pic from cgsociety from 2008... it really feels like all people just left the room.


Also there's a lot of bright green, maybe it should be so but i feel it's a bit to much... maybe the green parts in the roof could be 20-30% darker (grey) than the roof itself.
You could try letting some sun streaks coming into the room giving it a some nice shadows and depth.
And maybe the camera feels a little to wide angle... or maybe it's just me haven't had any morning coffee yet
Some say that arch-viz looks best with a 35mm setting, even if you don't get the entire room it feels more natural.

Other than that great lighting, modeling and render.
How did you light your scene by the way?

Cheers

[bdancer]

Re: Multimedia Classroom

Use VRayMtl - there is such =)

[Guest]

Re: Multimedia Classroom

Hi jakerlund!
Thanks for your comment
I agreed with what you're said, it needs more real life looking
actually i am a bit hurry (maybe much ) when creating this image
i just can't wait to render it after modeled all object and didn't pay much attention about that, so many thanks for you..

and about the camera, the camera itself has 20 mm focal lenght and yep, i agreed with you about 35 mm focal length, it comfortable for human eye, right?

and about the lighting, i placed 2 big rectangle area light (invisible=on) along the 2 massive green thing on the top, it plays a big role to illuminates the scene..
and the ies lamp to add visual interesting to the scene (i guess)..
so that's it Jakerlund..

[brano]

Re: Multimedia Classroom

Yes, that green color is just too much.
But I see your next render, when you consider suggestions from Jakerlund and you will not hurry to render it

Great job

[Guest]

Re: Multimedia Classroom

Hi guys..
it's been a while since my first upload..
i've been very busy with my study on college..
by the way, here is my re-render multimedia classroom..
i changed the wall paint color, and randomizes the models a bit..
and the camera now taking from the back of the class and had 35 mm focal length..
and of course, rotating the angle a little bit too..
thanks for Jakerlund for the inspiration image..
but, i am sorry Jakerlund, i am not creating the sun coming from the outside, cause i am focused to create this just from the pure indoor lighting..
so that's it guys.. (sorry, if there is grammar error by the way)
again, i am still learning, so comment, crits, and suggestion are gratefully welcomed..

[Jakerlund]

Re: Multimedia Classroom

Wow, amazing update
It is much more alive now, god job.
Right now it is still a little flat i would like some sunlight that would have some light streaks going into the room from a window to give it some contrast and pop.
Or some light sources that sticks out and makes some contrast in the scene... it's still a little flat.
But it already looks much better than before