arty farty qantas plane

[a320]

ok sorry ppl's, ill stop posting pics of planes.. this will be the last one i promise......

just wanted to get a crit on this arty piece..
thanks for any comments..

[sykes]

AWFUL...COMPLETELY MISSED..................................NAHHHH !! just kidding !

Do you have some free flight tickets for me !! nice piece..of course, you know it

[s0real]

that's the best one yet IMO.
really nice mood to the image.

perhaps you could put some vortices at the tips of the wings + tail and heat blur behind the engines, but the image doesn't really need it.
here's an image of an a340 with vortices coming off the winglets>http://www.airliners.net/open.file/460662/M/

i bet you could sell posters of that to plane spotters.

are these for a commercial project, or for fun?

[J_Bug]

It's nice but the colors are a little too much and distracting from the composition, IMHO. The lower portion of the image seems almost too unreal and over saturated. Also the bright yellow looks like a flame at first glance. The upper sky and jet both look great though

--Jon

Hey, I just realized that the background image is mirrored. If you just make a cloud layer it could fix what I mentioned.

[Zero One 010110]

Ladys and Gentelman, if you can see trough the right window, you can see what's left of a nuclear explosion.........

Great stuff man, i like it!!

[cocolas]

I like the yellow jet flame coming out of its back.... :P :P

[a320]

sykes: free tickets? mate, if air ticket prices keep dropping like they are, we'll be flying for free (almost) one day..... i hope...

sOreal: oh vortices.... have u seen them on planes in real life? damn they're cool dont u think? and yes, that would be a nice addition, ill give it a shot These pics are just for fun, i'm a bit of an aviation nut, so yeh I hope to be able to work on some commercial projects involving planes one day..

J_bug: hehe yes i didn't think i'd get away with just mirroring it i play around with the colours and saturation and see how it turns out.

Zero One: aww i love inflight announcements

cocolas: ooh, if only it was intentional.. thanks tho!

[nvanherpt]

cool, although i would have to agree on the colour being initially overpowering.

nik

[jacksc02]

nice image, my only problem with it is the mirrored background! I didnt spot it at first but look at it closely and you will spot it.
Good work though!

Chris Jackson
cj@arcad.co.nz
www.arcad.co.nz

[Matt_3D]

So the devil flies Qantas too?

Nice work A320, I like the little glow on the tip of the wing. Have you tried making it slightly more reflective? I must say, you're not far off fooling people into thinking it's a photo. Very nice indeed

-Matt

[DaForce]

sweet render dude

[a320]

ok made some changes to the way the colours blend in with the background..

[Matt_3D]

Shweeeeet!

Looking good Hen. Not sure which one I like better. I think the second one might be a bit bright and washed out but they both fit nicely with their backgrounds.

-Matt

[cocolas]

looks good!!

I like the first one the best.......they both fit pretty well w/ their backgrounds.

they lighting is also very good.....


paul.