Entrance Office building

[oligophant]

Im finishing some images, but i want to read your opinions on what i could improve them.


Only photoshop with several masks to control contrast.

[glorybound]

nice. Maybe, a little blown-out on the left. It took me awhile to make out the details.

[mario74]

i can see blue sky and clouds outside, slightly overexposed sky and/but the light is on.

the lens-flares telling me, your exposure time have to be longer as usual - and in your case, this will result in a high overexposed area outside.

it looks strange to me, and first of all, i would try to find a compromise between light outside and light inside.

with that kind of light you have inside, and as Bobby mentioned already the blown-out areas, you could try a night or late evening outside and than the flares will fit in there

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/9...n200mm2814.jpg

regards, Mario

edit: typo

[oligophant]

Thanks so much for feedback guys

nice. Maybe, a little blown-out on the left. It took me awhile to make out the details.

Right, i reduce intensity on the spots to gain more depth

i can see blue sky and clouds outside, slightly overexposed sky and/but the light is on.
the lens-flares telling me, your exposure time have to be longer as usual - and in your case, this will result in a high overexposed area outside.
it looks strange to me, and first of all, i would try to find a compromise between light outside and light inside.

Im used a photographic approach, f8, s 1/60 and iso 100,by doing that i still have some detail on the outside and not a blownup white. The light flares i think it fits on your image example but, with that i still had areas underexposed so i used several little lights to brighten those zones, (scott hargis technique), vray planes were used with 5000k and 100x100mm size, . I post the rest of the series.

[plastic_]

The thing is, it's very empty. Basically you got over 50% of areas where absolutely nothing happens, empty walls.
If that's how it is and you don't have more data of the design, I'd move the camera around to focus more on the parts where there is something to see. The ultrawide lens isn't really helping here either.
Btw frontal perspective (looking straight onto a wall to minimize perspective distortion) would also help.

[flino2004]

I think the main problem here is that you want to show the light features during day time....maybe if you have two views showing daytime with direct light and shadows and the second view same camera in dusk or night would be much better.
the paint on top looks for sure out of scale and low res.

Fernando

[Neilg]

The composition is kind of clumsy too - there's no defined focus & all the lines clash. Going for a 1-point and lowering the camera would help massively. also you never have to go wide if the space is tight - use a narrower lens and put the camera inside wall with a clipping plane.