Adventure Playground

[glorybound]

Here is a small project that I thought I would share.

[Dariusz Makowski (Dadal)]

Its very nice.

I noticed that most of ur renders are very sharp and crispy. Would you consider making them a little more realistic by using DOF with f5.6 values maybe? I think they might look quite a bit better - in my eyes than those oversharp ones.

[glorybound]

I expected that comment... it's a bad habit that I need to break, I guess.

[andybot_cg]

looks great! Tho are the swings really 4ft off the ground, or is your viewpoint just that low?

[Neilg]

The camera is very low - it's height is in proportion as if it were a 2 story house...

I'd lower the swings slightly and raise the camera a bit, meet in the middle until that doesnt look odd.

[glorybound]

I was going for the kids eye, but the swings do look mighty high.

[glorybound]

Okay, here is an update

[kiteman]

I personally would lower swing seats, are too high. Otherwise it is perfect.

Regards.

[AJ Jefferies]

I agree, those swings seats still look dangerously high. They look about the same height as the fence. Other than that, it looks great.

[glorybound]

I measure it and they are 2' off the ground, which is code.

[Neilg]

How high is that fence then?

[glorybound]

the fence is 3'; the post are higher.

[jacksc02]

the swings look like you need a ladder to get up to!
Add a person/child for scale.
It will really help.
Also the seat of the swing looks small due to the camera height so maybe cheat and make it bigger

[gunny263]

there is no building code for renderings. Cheating the swings down would help the image and give the viewer a better sense of how the playset would be experienced by a child.

[VrayMaterials]

Really nicely framed image, great materials and lighting, although the swings look very high up.! Maybe lower them a bit to make the scale more realistic, but apart from that really nice.