The Cottage Playhouse

[glorybound]

Here, is one of those little kids playhouses.

[andybot_cg]

Hi Bobby,
Nice landscaping, but the architecture needs a little more something. Corner boards & window sashes maybe? Wood grain bump on the eaves or some kind of texture? The building feels very CG.

Andy

[glorybound]

Yes, but that's what he is selling. No corner board, over hang.... Here is an update. I pasted a shadow in to blend the little house into the scene a little better (I hope it doesn't look too cut/pasted). I also added some wood grain to the siding.

[glorybound]

nope! to distracting on that shadow, so here is is without.

[Dariusz Makowski (Dadal)]

Its because shadow is crap. get it proper with leaves and so on. Then it will look nice

Also Bobby com onnn get us some DOF and smother AA filter! This sharpness ahh my eyeess bleedinggg

[glorybound]

small update, but nothing with the sharpness. I have never had luck with DOF in Vray, and post just isn't as nice. My render times get way to high to warrant, at least in my opinion, DOF; especially with exterior scenes.

[andybot_cg]

Yes, but that's what he is selling. No corner board, over hang.... I also added some wood grain to the siding.

Don't really see the grain, but anyway, I meant that more for the eaves - such a large expanse of flat white area.

If no corner boards, I would suggest giving the siding displacement, it looks like you're using bump. The corners of the building are way too straight edge.

[glorybound]

Okay, here is an update.

[glorybound]

After comparing the day, to the night, I like the day better. Having said that, the materials on the night are better, so I am going to do the day version over with the night materials.

[andybot_cg]

materials and building look great! Thumbs up!

Yeah, the image has very low contrast in the evening shot, I prefer the day view too.

[glorybound]

here is an update.. I think I am done