Exterior apartment building

[bpozas]

C&C welcomed!

[DP]

looks nice

crits would be that the windows look lifeless and that the street number jumps out at you a lot.

nice foreground trees...your own?

[Matt_3D]

I'm liking it

Have to make a couple of comments though,

Like the previous post said, the interior is very lifeless. A little furniture inside would make it look better.

What material is on the front where the number is? On the wall by the left of that section, the shadows look a little off. Are they shadows or is that a painted on design?

Overall it's looking awesome but I thought I'd be picky

-Matt

[RErender]

Very nice, love the landscape. I prefer a bit bluer sky but a very nice composition.

[natty]

looks great .. just as before, the glass needs some reflection and the building is slitly leaning over from the camera ,,, maybe a bit of camera adjust.

regards

[Zero One 010110]

Que onda Pozas, este trabajo esta de poca m... pero si es cierto con los reflejos en los cristales, desde el otro dia he querido que este Carlos F. nos presente, para echarnos una platicada, el ya te llevo unos trabajos mios, y pues por aqui he visto algunos tuyos, si tienes ganas, dejame un mensaje por aqui, o, mandame un mail, zero_one_010110@prodigy.net.mx Saludos k!

[natty]

sorry Zero One 010110, but whats the English version.

[Intenzity]

He was just saying that we all should revolt and overthrow Natty as moderator

Just kidding

They're buddies and zero one commented that like the others said the glass doesn't look right and that maybe they should meet up to talk because bpozas has been doing work for zero.

[holyghost]

I think that of you're using max6 you can try to ad the camera modifier to correct the perspective factor....this could help your image! Also there's something in your light that disturbs a little....notice that by the way your image is good!
But take a look at Daneb's posts to study his setting to improve your image!
Valerio

[TJE]

Good work! I not too keen on the tilting perspective, though...

[anders]

super pic ..
only thing I can see it that it's a bit on the dark side, so I would probably try a tiny bit of levels in photoshop =)

try something like levels: 6 - 1,55 - 236, if you have photoshop!
and please do post some more pics!


ps I LOVE the glass doors!

[LuKa]

Very nice rendering! How did u make the central tree and surrounding shrubs?

[Zero One 010110]

Hi guys, sorry if i didnt posted " the english version" but bpozas lives here in the same city i do, and we have common friends but we have never actually met, so, the idea was, when we could meet, and, i was giving him my comments about the image, that i think too the cristals lack of some reflections, and no, he hasn't done any job for me and neither i have done any work for him!

Sorry Natty bout the spanish ver, but sometimes its nicer when someone leaves you a message on your own langauge!!

Thanks guys!! Cya l8tr!!

[bpozas]

Zero one 010110

A ver cuando nos vemos , yo salgo de vacaciones hoy pero el lunes estoy aqui, dile a JC que nos juntemos la semana que entra.

Saludos!

[Zero One 010110]

OK Pozas, yo le digo, mientras pasatela bien, Nos vemos la semana que entra!