Small Kitchen

[glorybound]

No, really small





Obviously, no color yet, but I thought I would get the sharing started.

[Macker]

DOF works really quite well in those shots, though naturally it emphasises just how small it is. Presumably (like most of my arch vis work) you want to make the space look as big as possible? Perhaps use a slightly smaller aperture/higher f number?

Compositionally, would it be worth trying some parralel/perpendicular shots? i.e. not at a jaunty angle across the room. Try looking dead straight down the room with a wide angle lens. Definitely drop the view so that the pendant lamp doesn't take so much of your attention.

[voltron7]

nice start, I like the second view more...lighting looks nice ,too, is it HDR?

[glorybound]

thanks! No HDRI, yet!

[glorybound]

I couldn't get rid of the high render times! These took 3 hours per view, and that is with the noise. Anyway, they are done, at least for now.

[glorybound]

I guess I was zoomed in to close while working. These did turn out pretty clean after all.

[Macker]

Those are some of the best renders I've seen you do. Nice work.

[glorybound]

thank you! Home owner so I had total liberties

Those are some of the best renders I've seen you do. Nice work.

[glorybound]

Added some counter space by moving the refrigerator.

[voltron7]

These look really good, Bobby.
My only CC would be the pitch black adjacent room is troubling me a bit, but personal preference, I suppose.
Nice work with a small space.

[glorybound]

yes. I am rendering it again. I added more sun coming through the windows, behind the camera.

[joconnell]

These are really nice Bobby. The exposure is spot on for the outside and inside and you've got a really realistic level of burn going on for the darker wood. Maybe a tiny bit oversharpened, perhaps it's time to start looking at some other lens aspects like a realistic amount of DOF for that shot?

Great work, congrats.

[glorybound]

I added some light, a little DOF, and small tweaks.

[zuliban]

looking good !,my only critic is i would make the light less bright to show better detail from the kitchen .

[glorybound]

Yah, I started to loose some detail in post. I also have to fix those back corner door panels, they should be inset.