Twonhouse interior

[bpozas]

This is the last interior I made, I'd like your opinion to better my work, thanks.

[natty]

looks nice ...where did you get the flowers from ... i was looking for some of those

[ma+]

prabably from http://www.ultra3d.com/

your picture looks realy nice...i like the floor texture...good work!

[sunnyc1]

Nice image.

There's only 4 suggestions I could make:

1) I wouldn't mind seeing some of the downlights turned on.
Might add some dynamics to the lighting. (Personal preference)

2) The outdoors area beyond the window seems very dull. I'd pump up
the sunlight outside to really emphasis that the is external and
therefore is a lightsource.

3) I could imagine a LCD TV sitting on the timber vertical wall facing
the dinning table. (Personal preference).

4) The lights above the table are shown on, but they don't seem to
be emitting any light.

Oh. One more thing, perhaps something in the bowl on the table.

I really like the stone table and the glass section of it.

Just my thoughts.

SunnyC

[RoarK]

hey that looks good!! i see certain similar elements from another render you posted, the table cept the it had a wood/glass top, the lamps, the dark wood panels, in any case, very nice textures...specially the basket one.

and mat, or anybody else, can you let me in on more "free" sites like ultra3d etc. ill be obliged

[Max_4_Arch]

great image , nice funiture and thx ma+ for link

[Neo2k1]

Really nice work!!

[Matt_3D]

Sweet image mate

Only crit I gould give would be the books on the table and the backrests on the couch and armchair. The books don't seem to fit in with the scene, maybe a bit bright? And it looks like you're having a tesselation problem on the top of the backrests, not sure if that's how it is supposed to look.

Everything else is awesome. Love the window and the lights.

-Matt

[s0real]

hi. really nice render.

i agree with the comment about turning on the downlights + i think the image would benefit from being a bit brighter overalll...

perhaps some subtle post work in photoshop...

[bpozas]

Thanks for all de suggestions, the sofas are from turbosquid ( author is pureart " great models " ) but the meshes are usually nurbs and when I turn them into editable meshes they lose precission.

The chairs are from www.e-interiors.net very usefull site for free models. The rest of the meshes are self made.

I don't ussually have a long time for this renders, I have to produce almost a render a day so there is not much time for detail.

My bussines name is ARKIMEDIA there are to people woking with me and we are based in Monterrey, Mexico. I'm interested in working with other people from around the world to see if in the next to years we can consolidate an International visaulization firm ( example: "screampoint" www.screampoint.com )

If somebody is interested my e-mail is bpozas@arkimedia.com.mx

Thanks