Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

Lakewood Hills

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • #16
    Is the bg defocused a bit? screen left it seems. I think its throwing the scale of the cg. Otherwise looks good color/lighting wise!
    Dmitry Vinnik
    Silhouette Images Inc.
    ShowReel:
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qxSJlvSwAhA
    https://www.linkedin.com/in/dmitry-v...-identity-name

    Comment


    • #17
      It was the highest resolution lake photo I could find.
      Bobby Parker
      www.bobby-parker.com
      e-mail: info@bobby-parker.com
      phone: 2188206812

      My current hardware setup:
      • Ryzen 9 5900x CPU
      • 128gb Vengeance RGB Pro RAM
      • NVIDIA GeForce RTX 4090 X2
      • ​Windows 11 Pro

      Comment


      • #18
        Looks great!
        I preferred your first version on 6/30, but this last one is nice too.
        Personally, I kinda wished I didn't feel the need to color adjust everything towards gray...starts to loose its happy place.

        Comment


        • #19
          Latest one looks great. I agree about BG a tad blurry, but still looks okay.
          What a strange hammock?! (Never had seen one like that, so far, but looks tree-friendly.)
          your birch trees are nice, but if I were picking trees for close around my house, it would definitely not be birch. They are a constant mess year round, and if there is any type of icing, they can bend down to the ground.
          Anyway, that's not really a rendering CC...
          Last edited by voltron7; 04-07-2014, 09:11 AM.

          Comment


          • #20
            I think in terms of composition, I would play the fg trees darker, not so bright, so it does not take away from the focus of the house. Another thing to consider in photography you do get some color spill in the lens from brights, something you can play up also around the edge of the roof and the sky.
            Dmitry Vinnik
            Silhouette Images Inc.
            ShowReel:
            https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qxSJlvSwAhA
            https://www.linkedin.com/in/dmitry-v...-identity-name

            Comment


            • #21
              I worked on the background a little... better?

              Click image for larger version

Name:	Linwood Hills.jpg
Views:	1
Size:	448.7 KB
ID:	853790
              Bobby Parker
              www.bobby-parker.com
              e-mail: info@bobby-parker.com
              phone: 2188206812

              My current hardware setup:
              • Ryzen 9 5900x CPU
              • 128gb Vengeance RGB Pro RAM
              • NVIDIA GeForce RTX 4090 X2
              • ​Windows 11 Pro

              Comment


              • #22
                Nice!
                Do you use Fur for the grass?

                Comment


                • #23
                  the grass is Autograss
                  Bobby Parker
                  www.bobby-parker.com
                  e-mail: info@bobby-parker.com
                  phone: 2188206812

                  My current hardware setup:
                  • Ryzen 9 5900x CPU
                  • 128gb Vengeance RGB Pro RAM
                  • NVIDIA GeForce RTX 4090 X2
                  • ​Windows 11 Pro

                  Comment


                  • #24
                    Yeah the grass is very nice, much better than ForestPro which I'm currently using.

                    I think the sky is a little blown out tbh, try reducing the exposure a little to get more blue in. Also a slight fog may be nice before the background, should let the house stand out a touch more.
                    PGDesigns.co.uk

                    Comment

                    Working...
                    X