Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

Mclaren Mp4-12C

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • Mclaren Mp4-12C

    Hi all,
    A personal fun piece for me. Can't take credit for the model (3D library), but did make a few adjustments + added detail + re-materialised.
    any C&C very much welcome.

    Click image for larger version

Name:	v04.RGB_s.jpg
Views:	1
Size:	339.7 KB
ID:	880505Click image for larger version

Name:	v03.RGB_s.jpg
Views:	1
Size:	301.8 KB
ID:	880504Click image for larger version

Name:	v02.RGB_s.jpg
Views:	1
Size:	433.6 KB
ID:	880503

  • #2
    Hey Man,

    Nice renders. Those headlights are looking really stylish and your paint looks very rich.

    Couple things. You ground shader/texture needs to be redone/reworked. It is very matte in most areas and highly reflective in small spots.
    Difficult to tell what type of material it is. I think a darker version of this foreground concrete would be more fitting. Prepare for your render times to skyrocket with a more glossy floor, however

    You softbox/bounce card light could use some intensity variation. They are not evenly lit in real life. Check out this ref to see some intensity variation on all the bounce cards/walls.

    Lastly, you'll want to pay attention/adjusts the lights to the lines of the car. If it does not accentuate the form primarily, the reflections will be distracting.

    Take care
    Last edited by AbeMata; 29-07-2014, 02:06 PM.
    Reel 2016

    Comment


    • #3
      Hi AbeMata,

      thank you for taking the time to provide your feedback, I think you're pretty much spot on! Eagerly waiting for some spare time to work on this
      thanks again.

      Comment


      • #4
        nice shader! what are you using? VrayCarPaint? Looks indeed very rich!
        Add Your Light LogoCheck out my tutorials, assets, free samples and weekly newsletter:
        www.AddYourLight.com
        Always looking to learn, become better and serve better.

        Comment


        • #5
          Originally posted by MANUEL_MOUSIOL View Post
          nice shader! what are you using? VrayCarPaint? Looks indeed very rich!
          Yes just the Vraycarpaint shader with a few tweaks


          edit: Click image for larger version

Name:	v05.RGB_color_s.jpg
Views:	1
Size:	286.0 KB
ID:	853899 update, one more render.
          Last edited by KAKTUSDIGITAL; 01-08-2014, 06:41 PM. Reason: update

          Comment


          • #6
            Very nice but... there is no one driving?
            paolo vaja
            www.3d-arch.it

            Comment

            Working...
            X