My Image_wip ! Help me to do like Eldar, pls !

[vocuong83]

@ Eldar'image :
http://www.chaoticdimension.com/foru...ghlight=autumn
@ vocuong83'image :
http://www.3dvn.com/photopost/showphoto.php?photo=235

Hi everybody , the first , so sorry for my English . I'm beginner on 3D work . Last month , I saw the Eldar'image , and i think this is the style of my life . Here is the scene quickly modelling , texture on Photoshop , Alright , i know some UV is not correct but i'm don't have more time , But i want to have light and shader like him done This image is the quick render , nothing to say . Can U talk to me how to have " effect " like him , about material , light , and render ???
I have wrote a letter for Eldar but i think Her or He so busy , now i don't have reply ! but i'm allway looking forward on the nice day , he'll write for me

[vocuong83]

hix nobody help me here my last test
http://www.3dvn.com/photopost/showphoto.php?photo=239

[Arkitec]

vocuong83,

I think your lighting is better. I guess what I dont like about it is the intense green coming from the scene. The modeling looks pretty good. The street texture looks a little large and blurred.

I think you have a great start, the difference between the images is quite evident in the camera angle and shot. Your image doesnt have the depth the other image has.... You need to create some foreground objects; maybe lurking around a building, showing some depth.

Its a good start though,

Arkitec

[J_Bug]

Starting to look pretty good. I suggest to learn from Eldars post and do a little research on this forum and vray.info to get better on the technical end. Your scene has a large variety of materials but everything looks to have the same shading. You should set some specular and falloffs on the right materials.

--Jon