Sycamore

[Jason Stewart]

For me the base of the trees looks to perfect. Maybe select a tree model with a better root structure or raise the gravel around the base of the tree as if it is over the roots. Some noise on the surface you are scattering the gravel would make it look more believable (you could soft select and pull up the center and apply a little noise so it is more mounded) and I would push those hedges together to form a continuous hedge.

IDK how you get to this point in 1.5 days though, maybe your days are longer than mine?

[glorybound]

Like most architects, this one wouldn't release the model, so I modeled from CAD drawings. I tend to work long hours

For me the base of the trees looks to perfect. Maybe select a tree model with a better root structure or raise the gravel around the base of the tree as if it is over the roots. Some noise on the surface you are scattering the gravel would make it look more believable (you could soft select and pull up the center and apply a little noise so it is more mounded) and I would push those hedges together to form a continuous hedge.

IDK how you get to this point in 1.5 days though, maybe your days are longer than mine?

[glorybound]

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They added a bunch of stuff. From now on, if it isn't given to me at the start, it's an extra fee. Good Grief! I modeled for that view and the view might have changed had I know a large wood fence was blocking everything.

[Vizioen]

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They added a bunch of stuff. From now on, if it isn't given to me at the start, it's an extra fee. Good Grief! I modeled for that view and the view might have changed had I know a large wood fence was blocking everything.

I like it, one of your best so far. The only thing I would change is the uvw tiling you get on your fence and in your pavement, it's not that visible but easy to solve using the randomize transform script from Neil Blevins.

[glorybound]

I have heard of that script; I think I'll try it, thanks! I did get feedback... "Now that I see the fence, let's just remove it!" Why I oughta!!!

[glorybound]

Now that I study it, the dirt isn't doing the image any favors. I'll probably make some changes, so I'll address that. The fence will probably go.

[glorybound]

Removed some dirt

[hoppergrass]

the composition is bothering me, if you shuffled a bit to the right you will give the building a bit more breathing space, see the front door and lessen the impact of the fence cutting you off from the entrance, rather it will then lead you into the view.

[glorybound]

I agree. They gave me a new site plan, late, and it had a fence. If I had the plan earlier I would have chosen another view. I only modeled what can be seen, so I'll have to model more if I move the camera. They approved the gray scale view.

[jacksc02]

I think it needs a little bit more colour. Especially in the trees and the roof

[glorybound]

The trees did come out dark. I even brightened them up in PS.

[glorybound]

Okay, finally got feedback and completed the render.

[elivnA]

Looks good. Only gripe I'd have is that the greens in the background and to the right of the image are a bit dark-ish.

[Vizioen]

Looks good. Only gripe I'd have is that the greens in the background and to the right of the image are a bit dark-ish.

Same remark; I would also desaturate the fence a bit but that's probably not what the architect wants.

[glorybound]

it did get a little gloomy back there, didn't it? I can fix that in post, I think.

Looks good. Only gripe I'd have is that the greens in the background and to the right of the image are a bit dark-ish.