wip- apartments

[kippu]

Hi long time since i posted....

apartments ...wip ... i know those trees are the same...just dint have time to change



please comment

[Zero One 010110]

Hi kip! ok.... first of all, i think that the colors on the building are too flat, maybe a little noise instead of a plain color will make a big difference here, maybe the people can be put later in PS? so u can match the lightning more easily, the black and white thing on the sidewalk its waaaay to big, and old lady could never climb it!! try lowering at least half of it, there isn't any reflections on the windows, which an hdr can fix, the shadows are too raytraced, playing with area shadows and the U value on the light will fix that, the cars...... just.... no..... cant...... take them out of your scene, crush them, and delete them, and finally, the background, its almost all sky, try and search something with a little mountain on the back, or something else, because your building looks like it is in the top of a mountain, try and use some 3d palm or tree, because those trees are the same, and look very ditracting. Oh, and the asphalt have a mapping or a mesh problem.

On another hand... whats the elliptical thing on the sky?? an UFO?? ready to make some abductions??

[rusted]

hi kippu,the curved part of the wall doesnt show gradations,maybe sunlight is too strong