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    This is my last work, i hope you like it
    C & C welcomed, please. Help me to be better

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    Gitano...you do some of the most "brightest" buildings I've ever seen...who needs the sun. Good lighting, good job.
    Indecisive archictects will be the death of us all.

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    • #3
      Where are you from?

      I don´t live in London,i live in south of Spain, in Málaga, see it in a map, here, almost all days of the year are like in the image.

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      • #4
        que tal!!!!
        me gusta tu trabajo , pero no crees que el render es demasiado perfecto?
        para que se vea un poco mas realistico necesita un poco de suciedad.
        el mapa de la banqueta se ve un poco raro.
        como quiera buen trabajo Gitano !!!!!!!!!

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        • #5
          good work but it does look like a model .. i think you need to lower the camera to street level
          Natty
          http://www.rendertime.co.uk

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          • #6
            yeah, it looks like a model. may be if you increase the punto de fuga.
            I'd also increase the contrast in photoshop.
            What about more trees or some plants and flouers on the windows?

            Great roof! How did you do that? is it geom?

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            • #7
              Thanks to all!!

              I´m starting to add dirt in asphalt and kerbs,next, the walls but my work is to sell houses and i can´t put so much dirt in the images, only a liiiitle

              The tiles are made with a matrix of a piece ( in AutoCad ), then i extrude that i need along the distance that i need, then i slice the parts that i don´t want to use.

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              • #8
                Good job, nice lighting.
                But, I think the horizon is to low.

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                • #9
                  good lighting
                  and I agree with natty opinion on the camera
                  about the plants which appz did u use speed tree or what?

                  bye and congratulations
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                  • #10
                    Hi gitano !

                    Yes there is a bit too much light and no contrast enough.
                    When you look at the background image, it's darker in the trees.
                    You should find almost the same in your tree in the street.
                    The trunk is almost white .
                    I know Spain sun brightness is stronger than anywhere else in the world
                    but a bit of contrast should welcome.

                    a la proxima !

                    gael

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                    • #11
                      Is this really your last work? I think it'scoming along nicely, so it would be a shame if you stopped now...

                      Seriously, I agree, there should be more contrast, even if it is in Spain. Remember, that the eye likes contrast...
                      Cheers,

                      /Thomas
                      Eyecadcher Media

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