exterior scene (summerhouse)

[pepolino]

a try of a exterior scene. i think it's not bad, but i'm not completly happy. what can i do better ? thanks for help !

[Dynedain]

well, to begin with, your arrangement of plants and objects seems a bit random, unplanned. For instance you have a desert plant growing out of the middle of a lawn! Wouldn't happen, the patio area is huge and make the furniture and single potted plant look pretty awkward.

My suggestion is to look at a lot of architecture photos with a critical eye to see what compositionally makes them good (besides the architecture itself). Pay attention to how a scene is setup for a successfull photo.

[pepolino]

thank a lot, this are basic advices for me. i'll try to allow this things.

[chris-x//]

Hi, good work, what i think is that the grass and trees look as not illuminated ad the main orange floor for example, shadows are a little too dark and the sun direction seems straight vertical. the pool looks awesome.
Good luck

[obeth]

i think i would make the waves on the water look a bit smaller