wood's building

[vince_1972]

Hello,

our last pics for promotion for 3 building in wood for family.
(5 days of work)

[jedisalf]

Great images, only 2 things:

1- In the second pic, the grass doesnt looks like grass.

2- The RPCs doesnt quite fits, why dont you make them transparent like the trees.

[vince_1972]

Thanks jedisalf,

1. there are no grass on my image, only gravel

2. It's not RPC, but i like your idea to make them like trees, thanks you

Vince

[cocolas]

hey vince,
nice work.

the first image has a bit of an issue with the comping.....like the house....on the far left...as if it's just pasted on top of the trees...and half is cut off....kinda distracting...other then that I like the lighting and primary building rendering........the background trees look a bit blurred/out of focus..but that's minor.

the second image looks good.....the only distracting thing is the gravel and repeating/tiling concrete/gravel in the foreground......it takes attention away abit.

and yeah, i would lower the opacity of the RPCs like you did w/ the trees....right now they are a bit disracting...

nice work man!!

paul.

[gafl]

Hi Vince !

I like your grass in the second picture...

I'm joking !

Wood is a very interesting material.

Great job !

Bye!
Gael